Have you ever been in a situation that would change someone else and your life forever. The time you would always remember till you die; in this case the memory is dying too soon.
Rain was hitting the roof like rocks, thunder was in the distance. Counting how far away it was with the seconds between each struck. Trees creaked and I knew there would be lots of the yard lying around to clean up.
Emerging lights soon became clear and a moving truck was on the path leading to the house next door. No one has lived in that shack for so long. I really haven't had any true friends, the odd one at school but they always moved away from here. Tending to not like the cold winters and the ever so hot scorching summers. Yes, you guessed it. I live in the prairies. The flattest land you can find in Canada. Its the country, farms for miles and miles, the wide open sky and the sweet smell of wheat. It really doesn't get any better than this.
Riding in the car home from school always felt like it took years to get home, but now that June was here it didn't seem like two seconds. We had become more than just friends. We had allot of things in common, both of us were only child's, we both liked green, and the smell of wheat. Nothing would ever come between us. Her parents really fixed up the old house, it looked just like ours, but painted with a different color. Our parents were best friends too. All I ever wanted I now have grasped by my hand, and forever I will hold onto it.
School was boring as usual, Mr. Algade was the worst teacher, home work and no talking just made him even worse. Of course he was there for me to start out a perfectly good morning. If June wasn't in that class with me I would probably shoot myself. Like I really hate that class, well okay not shoot myself but skip. Then I would eventually be caught and get in trouble the usual. Right after Mr. Algae, nicknames gotta have them, he hates it though. I had Mrs. Nickerson. She was a little better than Algae but still pretty brutal. I mean what if we are thirsty if you gotta get a drink you gotta get a drink. Oh. yeah and the nick name for her, was no other than Nick-Tick because she was a tick. Burrowing into your brain and making it ache and such a nuisance.
The day was finally finished. June and I decided to hang after school and get some homework done. After all living so close to each other it was so simple to do everything together. Supper came just around the corner. It was the beginning of the weekend. Tomorrow June and I are going for a hike in our mountains we haven't been up there since last summer, time to discover some new wild friends.
As our hearts began to pop out of our chests we were out of breath finally when we reached the top. What a hull. The path we were going to walk on was in sight. Soon we got further into the forest. June wanted to go left but that's the way we always go. So we went right, we started laughing and in the distance you could hear, a slight noise. What was it, a dark cloud drifted over us it was bees. We must of startled the hive. They began to viciously swarm us and we were rolling on the forest floor trying to detach them from us. With rage they slowly torchured us, driving stingers into our skin. They soon left after they had claimed victory.
Laying there in silence was June, I tapped her arm but still no response. Could this be true, I have actually killed my best and only friend. Okay, stay calm I told myself, lets just call 911, I suddenly glance down at my phone. NO SERVICE. Are you kidding me. I could feel me about to have a heart attack, I had everything now it was gone. I let go of what I grasped.
Climbing a tree i get service, call 911 first then home. My dad and June's dad took the quads up to us, surprisingly they got here before the rescue crew. We put June on the back with her dad, raced her down the mountain into the truck and straight to the hospital. Why didn't i listen to you why.
Only family was allowed into the emergency room, but I am family I yelled. They soon told me to shut it. I could feel my face getting hot, were the tears coming to get me. Drag me down to depression. I wont let them I told myself.
A few hours went by, what is going on, is she alive or dead. That's all I want to know. The Doctor and Junes dad came out. As they slowly walked up to me. The lowed sound of their unforgiving foot steps echoed through the dead silent hallways of the suppose "Life Saving House". "Miley, Junes in a coma, shes not going to make it". I didn't say anything. Looking at the ground my tears began to build in my eyes. Dripping from my face I stated my opinion. "No shes not", yelling at the top of my lungs, I ran into the room where she was contained. "I'm so sorry June I should of listened to you, I'm sorry". The doctors tried to make me leave, I was never going to leave her side, I've got your six, just like you've always had mine.
I fell asleep at her side, and the next morning I woke there. Coming to the idea that shes gone I got up and turned to walk away in tears, but I still had that feeling that she will wake and when she does I would be there. The Doctor came in and explained the situation quite harshly to me by saying, "There's no hope shes not making any progress, not taking to the medicine". Please keep going please, that's all I wanted to say but the words just didn't emerge.
Days went by, no sound no sign of movement. She was drifting away from me. Her mom and dad stayed with her for an hour, so I was able to get a shower in but right after I came back to her side. They left crying at like ten but I forced myself to stay awake cause I know she would do the same for me. I cried at her side and asked the world why her, and not me. I got up so my faced wasn't so burrowed into the covers she had laying on her. I saw a tear fall from her white face, could it be true, miracles are not a fake. her hand moved to mine, "because it was destiny". I buzzed for the nurse, she ran in. "Alive, and awake", well your one lucky gal. We gave each other a hug, and said at the same time, "I've got your six".
Rain was hitting the roof like rocks, thunder was in the distance. Counting how far away it was with the seconds between each struck. Trees creaked and I knew there would be lots of the yard lying around to clean up.
Emerging lights soon became clear and a moving truck was on the path leading to the house next door. No one has lived in that shack for so long. I really haven't had any true friends, the odd one at school but they always moved away from here. Tending to not like the cold winters and the ever so hot scorching summers. Yes, you guessed it. I live in the prairies. The flattest land you can find in Canada. Its the country, farms for miles and miles, the wide open sky and the sweet smell of wheat. It really doesn't get any better than this.
Riding in the car home from school always felt like it took years to get home, but now that June was here it didn't seem like two seconds. We had become more than just friends. We had allot of things in common, both of us were only child's, we both liked green, and the smell of wheat. Nothing would ever come between us. Her parents really fixed up the old house, it looked just like ours, but painted with a different color. Our parents were best friends too. All I ever wanted I now have grasped by my hand, and forever I will hold onto it.
School was boring as usual, Mr. Algade was the worst teacher, home work and no talking just made him even worse. Of course he was there for me to start out a perfectly good morning. If June wasn't in that class with me I would probably shoot myself. Like I really hate that class, well okay not shoot myself but skip. Then I would eventually be caught and get in trouble the usual. Right after Mr. Algae, nicknames gotta have them, he hates it though. I had Mrs. Nickerson. She was a little better than Algae but still pretty brutal. I mean what if we are thirsty if you gotta get a drink you gotta get a drink. Oh. yeah and the nick name for her, was no other than Nick-Tick because she was a tick. Burrowing into your brain and making it ache and such a nuisance.
The day was finally finished. June and I decided to hang after school and get some homework done. After all living so close to each other it was so simple to do everything together. Supper came just around the corner. It was the beginning of the weekend. Tomorrow June and I are going for a hike in our mountains we haven't been up there since last summer, time to discover some new wild friends.
As our hearts began to pop out of our chests we were out of breath finally when we reached the top. What a hull. The path we were going to walk on was in sight. Soon we got further into the forest. June wanted to go left but that's the way we always go. So we went right, we started laughing and in the distance you could hear, a slight noise. What was it, a dark cloud drifted over us it was bees. We must of startled the hive. They began to viciously swarm us and we were rolling on the forest floor trying to detach them from us. With rage they slowly torchured us, driving stingers into our skin. They soon left after they had claimed victory.
Laying there in silence was June, I tapped her arm but still no response. Could this be true, I have actually killed my best and only friend. Okay, stay calm I told myself, lets just call 911, I suddenly glance down at my phone. NO SERVICE. Are you kidding me. I could feel me about to have a heart attack, I had everything now it was gone. I let go of what I grasped.
Climbing a tree i get service, call 911 first then home. My dad and June's dad took the quads up to us, surprisingly they got here before the rescue crew. We put June on the back with her dad, raced her down the mountain into the truck and straight to the hospital. Why didn't i listen to you why.
Only family was allowed into the emergency room, but I am family I yelled. They soon told me to shut it. I could feel my face getting hot, were the tears coming to get me. Drag me down to depression. I wont let them I told myself.
A few hours went by, what is going on, is she alive or dead. That's all I want to know. The Doctor and Junes dad came out. As they slowly walked up to me. The lowed sound of their unforgiving foot steps echoed through the dead silent hallways of the suppose "Life Saving House". "Miley, Junes in a coma, shes not going to make it". I didn't say anything. Looking at the ground my tears began to build in my eyes. Dripping from my face I stated my opinion. "No shes not", yelling at the top of my lungs, I ran into the room where she was contained. "I'm so sorry June I should of listened to you, I'm sorry". The doctors tried to make me leave, I was never going to leave her side, I've got your six, just like you've always had mine.
I fell asleep at her side, and the next morning I woke there. Coming to the idea that shes gone I got up and turned to walk away in tears, but I still had that feeling that she will wake and when she does I would be there. The Doctor came in and explained the situation quite harshly to me by saying, "There's no hope shes not making any progress, not taking to the medicine". Please keep going please, that's all I wanted to say but the words just didn't emerge.
Days went by, no sound no sign of movement. She was drifting away from me. Her mom and dad stayed with her for an hour, so I was able to get a shower in but right after I came back to her side. They left crying at like ten but I forced myself to stay awake cause I know she would do the same for me. I cried at her side and asked the world why her, and not me. I got up so my faced wasn't so burrowed into the covers she had laying on her. I saw a tear fall from her white face, could it be true, miracles are not a fake. her hand moved to mine, "because it was destiny". I buzzed for the nurse, she ran in. "Alive, and awake", well your one lucky gal. We gave each other a hug, and said at the same time, "I've got your six".
VERY GOOD story!!!!! i enjoyed reading it very origanal i wiuld give this a 5/5!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing!! very organized.. definatley a 5
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