What do you want to do before you die. Could it possibly be travel the world this is what I want to do, this is where my journey begins. Read my list......
The car is swerving, back and fourth across the yellow line that breaks up left from right traffic. I start to think, and asking questions to myself that have no answer. I wanted to travel the world, go to university. Make a difference in the life of others. In my case, I've never gotten to grow up. When your young, everybody who you know, asks you the same question. "What do you want to be when you grow up". My answer was always the same, " I want to be a veterinarian". That hope, that dream will now never come true. As the high beams of a vehicle become more clear I knew right then and there I was done for it. We swerved into the opposite lane, the on coming traffic was a death trap for me and my family. It was just too soon. Then it hit all was lost.
I have no idea where I am, could I be lost. Paramedics rush to my body but soon look up giving the CPR procedure and shake there head. Suddenly I realized that in that very moment the life had been shaken out of me. I was dead. But how, why. I had so much to live for. My pets at home my mom and dad. This cant be happening wake up I told myself, wake up. I screamed at the top of my lungs, "somebody, anybody can you hear me !". The paramedics soon after me, had rushed over to my family. The heart meter was a negative, but after a few hits to the chest it was positive and soon the life was brought back again. One of the police cars was off to the side with an RCMP leaning against the hood. Shaking his head at the look of my helpless body that was once me. Awake, feeling and alive. I knew he thought there could still be a miracle just waiting to be taken up with. He ran over to me, the sound of his footsteps was like the quite whisper of the wind. He once again began the CPR procedure, as I coughed a breath was released. I was so excited and, but at the same moment my heart began to fall. never would it stop, I was in a comma. I was so fortunate for that man to have hope. When I wake up I will give him many thanks for believing that miracles do come true. I wonder why I'm still invisible, but now that I know I'm in good hands and alive I will be able to do what I want before I die. I most definitely wont go to university because that is strictly something I just rather do alive in my real body. I will travel the world go places I've always wanted, and better yet it will all be at no cost.
Travel to Paris for a week, see the sunset over the ocean. My dreams and journeys will never end even when I awake from this deep sleep. I will watch over my family as they heal at a faster pace than me. Just before I see my eyes start to open. Suddenly closing as the light above is much too bright. For the last few seconds that seem like days watching over my adrenaline raging body I say one last sentence, for I am still invisible. When I awake I will remember this tragedy. I will forgive that night but never will I forget.
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I love how you went about the topic. I like your idea about going to Paris and watching the sunset. You could have gone into a little bit more detail about the place you wanted to see. For ideas I think you are at a 5.
ReplyDeleteI agree, I liked your ideas and how you went about the topic. It had my attention and I just wanted to keep reading. I think you could've added more detail about going to Paris too, and say more about what you would do when your invisible. I would give you a 4. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteHonestly you got the wrong idea we where suposed to writing a story not an question altough with that to the side you paragraph was intersting way to talk about how you turned invisible. I give 3/5
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